Please!

Well, I'm new to this poem site, but my girl has been here for a while. I've posted two poems of mine and I would appreciate if anyone could comment and rate them. I will gladly return the favor. Thanks.

K i did one :)
please r/r/c which ever one of my poems u like the most
thanxs

Babe, I commented your poems already. Me encantaron mucho! Te amo amor mio!!