Taking Titles

  • MyEscape
    16 years ago

    Song Titles From Various Artists

    Rules:

    1 Poem per poet
    2 poets per title
    NO cussing
    NO erotica (sensuality)
    NO religious tones at all!

    TITLES:

    Somewhere In Between
    * ReproducedByIntelligence (DONE)
    * Jess (DONE)

    First Time
    *mOnStRiToS pRiNcEsS (DONE)
    * SarahDale (DONE)

    Here By Me
    *MaryAnne Skora (reserved)
    *

    Broken
    * Stillmomsgirl (DONE)
    *

    Let Me Go
    *TheWorldFellNUWerentThere (reserved)

    *

    Best of Me
    *HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG (reserved)
    *

    Satellite
    *
    *

    1st Place 7 RRC'S
    2nd Place 5 RRC's
    3rd Place 3 RRC's

    DUE DATE: JAN. 15th!!!!!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    16 years ago

    Best of me, please :]

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Somewhere In Between

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Somewhere In Between.

    If memories could paint a path of gold,
    ours would be the brightest of them all.
    With sparkles splattered all about,
    and spray painted hearts lining the road.

    If shadows could tell a life long story,
    ours would be the gloomiest of them all.
    With blood splattered all about,
    and spray painted skulls on you and me.

    If immature ways could fool the world,
    our egos would be the largest of them all.
    With pride splattered all about,
    and spray painted freaks defining the word.

    If love could do a three-sixty,
    ours would fail like all of them.
    With heartbreak splattered all about,
    and spray painted hearts somewhere in between.

  • MyEscape
    16 years ago

    Yes you can!
    *ME*

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    I wanna reserve "First Time" Please!

    Thanks!

    *Cindy*

  • stillmomsgirl
    16 years ago

    Ive never done this before so i dont know. If i already have a poem related to one of the above titles but with a slightly different title, Ex: my poem is called, "The Girl Who Cries Broken", could i change the title to "Broken" for the contest and use the poem?

  • MyEscape
    16 years ago

    In this case I'll allow that. It's fine! :)
    *ME*

  • FridusBlueheaven
    16 years ago

    I'd love to have "Best Of Me"

    Please...

  • Moose
    16 years ago

    Let me go?

    please?

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    "First Time" would be amazing. .. please. . .

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    TITLE: First Time
    BY: SarahDale

    The first time I gazed into your alluring eyes,
    I was absorbed; swallowed by their unseen depth.
    The first time I heard your vibrant voice,
    I was mesmerized; entranced by each timbre that passes your lips.
    The first time I entwined my fingers in yours,
    I was fascinated; amazed by each strong yet achingly tender caress.

    The first time I engaged you in playful flirtation,
    I smiled inwardly; smitten by your boyish charm.
    The first time I allowed you into my world,
    I swallowed nervously; startled by the depth of my love for you.
    The first time I thought you'd perish from my life,
    I cried silently, frightened by the possibility of being without you.

    The first time I listened to the sound of your heart beats,
    I couldn't stop; aspired by the prospect that it might beat for me.
    The first time I laid enveloped in your welcoming arms,
    I couldn't believe; overwhelmed by the intensity of the security they provide.
    The first time I took a glimpse at your soul,
    I couldn't blink; captivated by the unspoken dreams and promises it offers.

    The first time I kissed your inviting lips,
    You embraced me, making me yearn for the feel of your gentle touch.
    The first time I whispered I love you in your ears,
    You kissed me; leaving me spellbound as your blissful lips engage mine.
    The first time I revealed my dreams to you,
    You impressed me, telling me that they're your dreams too.

    Of all the experiences that we have been through,
    These are a few of the first times I've shared with you.
    They're the cherished first times that have come to past,
    Yet they are the memories that will perpetually last.

  • stillmomsgirl
    16 years ago

    Thanx
    then could i have Broken plz

  • Poet on the Piano
    16 years ago

    I would like Here By Me, please.
    Thanks!!

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    Uhhmmm... could I have another?? I'll take the "Satellite" thanks!

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    ....................((((( E X C L U D E D )))))...................
    TITLE: Satellite (The Moon)
    BY: SarahDale

    Cold globe of dark night
    Lying constantly steady, lifeless
    A background of pallid gray
    With sprinkles of black, in your crust
    Moonlight giving warmth. . .
    In the night

    Unaware we sleep in your presence
    Shine brilliantly and give light
    To those strangers straying
    Beneath your marvelous gleams
    Give hope to those souls that dwell. .
    In the night

    Never misguide us as we take our path
    Journeying the dim road we'll take
    Revolving around the green planet
    Never leave your axis upon rotating
    In day, blocked by cotton clouds. . Shining
    In the night

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    There, I'm done with "First Time" and "Satellite"

    Good luck to all of us! ^^,

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    16 years ago

    Let Me Go please

    xx thank you

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    First Time

    The first time I laid eyes on you,
    There was something inside of you
    You looked at me like no one different,
    And I knew you wanted to talk.

    The first time I talked to you,
    You had that sweet little boy's voice.
    We became the best of friends,
    And we became inseparable.

    The first time you laid a kiss on my lips,
    Was the most amazing feeling I got.
    My stomach began getting butterflies,
    And my heart began to ache for your love.

    The first time you held my hand,
    I knew this was real love.
    You held me like no one had ever done before,
    That is why I feel protected with you.

    .:CiNdY LoPeZ:.
    .:Jan. 3, 2008:.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    Edit....

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    Oh another, I'll make a reservation for "Broken" please and please. . .

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    ....................((((( E X C L U D E D )))))...................
    TITLE: Broken
    BY: SarahDale

    Smokescreen of atmosphere thickened along our vast horizon
    Various hazardous gases driven by gushing westerly winds
    Reaching upon our breath, dreaded biological components we imprison
    Unaware we struggle life, deteriorating our unattended health

    Frozen ice caps melting with superb haste flowing in the equator downward
    Slowly submerging outlying continental areas of broken dreams
    Whirlpool dancing with massive velocity, entrusted our lives on fortune cards
    Shattered futuristic promises lying in the edge of ruined denuded mountains

    Marvelous architecture and sky high wonders of wasted essence
    As nature of maelstrom filled with vengeance taking desperate lives
    Consequence to bestow upon mankind of greed and delights, absence. . .
    Of conservation and moral insight mesmerized to nature's painful torture

    Hungry never contended desires vaporized above the oceans of time
    Hearts screaming loudly for mercy as souls stands along the valley. . . . . of despair and wrecked lives

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    OMG! I've posted three entries while the rule says "1 Poem per Poet". . . so. . . I'm sorry. .

    I'll exclude the other 2:
    ~Satellite
    ~Broken

    Sorry by the way, I forgot

    just let me know if you'd want to change the rules and make it more than 1 poet per title. .ahehehe, that would be better I guess. . the decision is yours. . take care

    Thanks!

  • MyEscape
    16 years ago

    Lol I was asked that question by someone else, and no it's still one per poet. it keeps it fair in my opinion. so if you would just edit those two poems out so I don't get confused, I'd appreciate it, though i thoroughly enjoy the enthusiasm you have for this contest! LOL :)
    *ME*

  • stillmomsgirl
    16 years ago

    Title: Broken(The Girl Who Cries Broken)
    By: stillmomsgirl

    No one is around when she falls apart
    She just falls silently until, finally,
    when she hits the ground
    she doesnt know how to get back up

    So she waits for someone to find her
    and put the pieces back together
    When someone eventually comes,
    her sharp edges push them away
    They figure picking her up isnt worth the pain

    She hates herself for pushing people away
    when she knows she needs help
    since she cant get up on her own

    She used to be beautiful before she fell
    Now she looks in the mirror
    and cant even see the original picture

    She tries to tell people how she fell,
    but they wont listen
    No one knows why shes broken

    No one knows that sometimes
    she gets so used to being broken,
    she cant even imagine what it feels like to be whole

    She pushes good things away
    so people figure she doesnt want help

    When she cries again, no one comes
    because its a known fact
    that you should never answer
    to the cry of a wolf

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    ^^, ok. .
    I'll exclude:

    *Satellite
    *Broken

  • MyEscape
    16 years ago

    Just a reminder that the Deadline is approaching and some of you still need to post! Any others are welcome to join in though if you can get it in by the due date!
    *ME*

  • Poet on the Piano
    16 years ago

    Here By Me

    Laying under the dazzling stars
    Always being close but never far
    Our fingers are softly entwined
    As your gentle lips reach mine

    Under the moon so very bright
    Everything just feels so right
    Watching the stars say goodbye
    Watching the sun arise in the sky

    Sitting near by the pleasant fire
    Having only one true desire
    To forever hold me in your heart
    So we will never be far apart

    Upon the glistening morning snow
    That is falling like rain so very low
    We're enjoying our lives together
    Upon this breathtaking weather

    No matter what we do or where we go
    You and I both easily know
    People everywhere can easily see
    That you are always here by me

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    16 years ago

    I'm sorry I could'nt do it. Its just I got writers block again and I can't feel nothing to write down. Sorry.

    Plus if I did get my writing back today it would be too late to do it. I don't have a computer at home no more. so sorry.