Is Anybody Else A Lyricist?

Okay, so I've written the first set of lyrics in a long time.
I was hoping someone else who writes lyrics, could read my new one (Free To Go) and give me as much criticism as they could. Or good comments if it's Just That Good. haha. I love harsh criticism though, so don't be afraid.
I'll return the favour(s). :)

Yeah its done

pls do my newest...

thanks and takecare!