New poem 'confused'. let me know what you think?

Right now, it's 2am and I just finished writing this poem "confused" for a guy i love but I don't know if its good enough to give to him so let me know what you think of it and write down any changes I should make. thanks.

any poems you want me to read/comment on then write them down too.

xxx

Done :), it was a great poem and I left my opinion on the matter. Hope it helps alittle. :)

Think you could read any one of mine :) thank you so much

Hi your poem was amazing,

just wondering if you could do any of my newest ones.

thanks heaps
xxo

A very beautiful piece. :]