HELP!!! (1 FOR 3)

I NEED SERIOUS HELP...
OK I STARTED THIS POEM NOT TOO LONG AGO. AND EVERYTHING WAS JUST FLOWING...BUT THEN I GOT STUCK. IM REALLY NEW TO WRITING SAD POEMS AND THIS ONE JUST CAME TO ME...
COULD U PLZ RRC "ABUSED AND CONFUSED" AND GIVE ME A LITTLE FEEDBACK?, AND I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR BY RRC 3 OF ANY OF YOUR POEMS

THANKS

I will read it and do my best to help you..
Yours Truly,
Kat

Ok i did it.. i sent you a msg.. so can u do mine?
-SOUNDTRACK
- UNTITLED
-THE STORY OF MY LIFE..
don't forget to vote! =]
i didn't vote on urs coz it's not yet done =]

Alright i commented and rated it. can u do...
"Wait For You"
"What Love Is"
"Sad Love Story"

thanks

Well dpne!

pls rrc my 3 newest

thanks alot