by Matt Pyke
Submission date : 2005-02-09
wow...that's an awesome poem...you have soo much talent...it shows...well done!
Amanda ( F )
You know you didn't have to be so rude in your comment! But, thanks anyways for taking the time to read it! You are a good writer, I'll just delete that poem that "didn't make sense". But before I do, I just thought I'd let you know that not all poetry has to rhyme and make sense to the audience, it's the writers feelings portrayed in their pieces! Keep it up though, you're a wonderful writer!
hey matt...you will continue to see me write about your poems...because they truly are amazing! I have written more poems please check them out! Keep writing you are great!
Natalie84 ( F P C D )
Wow.....awesome poem Matt!!
I didnt like it at first. But after re-reading it I have to say some parts were mad.