Submission date : 2007-11-28
Last edit : 2007-12-19
i gave u a piece of my heart ( F P C D )
Wow another great poem...very dark but i liiked it!!!
SarahDale ( F P C D )
This is somehow interesting though some mistakes are quite visible and the flow is kinda weak, but really, I liked it coz I get what this poem wants to portray. . .
Big hersh ( F P C D )