Comments - Charcoal Waves

Sylvia ( F P C D ) at 2010-12-21

Nice work with the image you used. Your words start with a feeling of turbulence then love as you talk about the emotions and feelings this person brings to your life. Well done. (I included a link to the website if anyone would like to see the image, Charcoal Waves

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2010-12-23

What a emotion filled piece. I could feel the love you still have for this person in every word you penned.
Nice work!
Love Cindy

Meena Krish ( F P C D ) at 2010-12-29

From start to finish I liked the flow as well as the smoothness of this write and the sentiments it holds..a lovely write :)

Robert Gardiner ( F P C D ) at 2011-01-08

Very nicely Written, Kel. Wonderful!!!

Richard S ( P ) at 2011-01-10

Your recent work is very ellaborate and involved. You are feeling more comfortable with the english language. Nice to catch up on your work.

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