Submission date : 2004-06-22
Ariel ( F D )
i didnt really like this 1 much but ill still look at ur others
this was a good poem, but its just missing something...
lpfan2006 ( F C D )
hey sup?!?! yeah i agree with nicole and ariel.... sumthing is missing. i dunno what it is but good poem!
Kristina K ( F C D )
Great job. You did well in writing this piece, though something might be missing. Maybe you would have to extend the poem a bit and get into more detail about reaping what you have sown.
Keep up the good work.