In this life of mine

by Mylie   Jul 8, 2014


I have been through a lot, Ive fought my way to where I am now, I have been up and Ive seen downs.

I have lived in misery and I have lived a life of love, life is unexpected you never know who will leave you or who you will love.

sometimes I wonder why we go through so much pain but at the end of the road it finally becomes a sunny day. I have been broken, beat down and bruised, my heart has been torn open and has been sewn back shut.

I have seen my demons, my faults, my fears. I have scars to prove it, I have lived a life beyond my years and yet I still wake up for another day and I have not yet gave up.

one day I will find happiness and you will see a smile upon my face.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I actually really enjoyed the words inside this poem, I think they are quite positive and uplifting, like you are reminding yourself of the good things, and what to hold on for.

    I do suggest you edit the poem a bit, in the form of its layout, spread it out a bit more so that people can be attracted to it more. You will get more readers I would think.

    Also, it would make it easier for you to add in some better punctuation for the reader, so that they know when to break your thoughts up.

    nice words.

    • 9 years ago

      by Mylie

      Thank you for reading and enjoying this poem, I find it very hard to write poetry when im not heart broken or sad, but it turned out pretty decent.
      Also I agree, I edited it more so it looks more attractive and more put together.

      But thank you, when you have time.. read and tell me what you think of the other ones.
      :)

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