Submission date : 2006-04-11
Last edit : 2006-04-18
Sourav ( F P C D )
Really a good poem. Nice rhythm and nice theme. A lovely work!
Łøşŧ+Ħøpĕş+Ćŗĩmşøń ( F P C D )
Theres some nice imagry, and good word usage, but all in all, not really one of your best imo
Loved it! Indeed Lovely. I would just say keep writing and share your imagination because you got the talent.
StMario ( C )
Great poem.... I still see her sitting in that opening looking across the green lands.
xxkill.elmo.ha.haxx ( F P C D )
A lot of discription! great job!