METH

by XxChelseaXx

I never thought i'd see the day
that you started doing drugs
it seems like only yesterday
that you would always give me hugs

i can't stand to look at you
when you're getting high
because i know with every hit
we're closer to saying goodbye

i don't want you to live like this
it's making our lives hell
we don't ever talk like we used to
all we do is yell

everytime i try to talk to you
you just walk away
why wont you even give me
5 minutes of your day?

you have a loving girlfriend
and a baby that's yours too
but it seems like you don't even care
about all the hell you're putting your family through

i remember when we were little
and you were always there for me
now it's like you're not my brother
who are you trying to be?

maybe you'll start to get the point
and stop doing meth
because it's not doing anything
but leading to your death.




 

Submission date : 2006-12-05

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HiddenxSoul ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-20

I'm really sorry. =[

This poem is really well written. I advise you to always capitalise where needed though, otherwise your work will look sloppy.

5/5.

Heartfelt Terrors ( F P C ) at 2006-12-20

Flow was choppy and not exactly great but the emotional quality was awesome. It's full of what is almost despair and sadness. Other than flow problems it was a cool write. The second stanza is my favorite. The emotion is well done.
~Faith-less

Shannon ( C ) at 2006-12-22

=( Thats sad... But however, It does tell about how familys are today. The last part is my favorite. Its so true and gets down to the point. And, Sorry about that!!

~Shae

Shannon ( C ) at 2006-12-22

By the way.. 5/5... Forgot to put it! haha

Angela Keebler ( C ) at 2007-11-18

This is a GREAT poem, I give it a 5. I have several about meth if u'd like to read them. I am a recovering meth head myself and meth takes away your ability to feel or care. Good luck to you and your family and GOD bless you all.



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