Layers like and onion

by ღtheღcrunkღpirateღ

like an onion
many layers
as each layer is shed
tears fall
til you've reached the core
and theres nothing left to unravel

as you can tell I'm not to shit hot on finding appropriate titles, this was written at 3 in the morning so its not to great either =)


Submission date : 2005-12-15

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Jason Meres ( F C D ) at 2005-12-19

Love the metaphor, simple and piercing. Drawn directly to the point with the simple format. I like it.

Sammi Morris ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-22

It's true! honesty again, good work. you write about different themes,
sammi morris