Comments : The Best Valentines Day

  • 9 years ago

    by Letty

    Again you have wrote one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. I admit the format was kind of awkward, but it didn't matter in this case. The concept of this poem was just simply beautiful. I loved it. Again you have proved that you're one magnificent poet. Keep up the great work!

    Letty

  • 9 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Thanks letty,
    as always it is nice hearing from you.
    the format is just a concept that i chosed to be that way, because in my opinion it slow down the reading speed, it is just how i see it myself.
    thank you again, it is great seeing you again here in this great community of P&Q

  • 9 years ago

    by Cayce

    Awww. You started writing again for your "future wife". That's so sweet. I agree with Letty, the format was really awkward, but It you read it with out all of those spaces it flows really well. I like the rhymes, they felt natural and not forced. Overall this was a great poem!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 9 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is such a sweet write. :] I'm glad to see you are back. The flow in this was pretty good, and you worded some things very originally and nicely in this. I loved this part most;
    'Tonight,
    I went to every street of
    The love land
    Collecting all the words
    For a new write.'
    I like the metaphor you used here. Well done. :]

    Tammie

  • 9 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    "I am writing her
    To say
    Happy Valentines Day
    This year is
    The most important valentines of my life
    Because
    I have the love of my future wife."
    This is my favorite stanza cuz it has so much meaning in it. Its good to have you back and writing poems. I realy enjoyed readint it. dast xosh.

  • 9 years ago

    by mrhope

    Hey mr. poet,
    welcome back
    I wrote you privite message three times but no response from you?
    I love this poem, I like the style. it is amazing

  • 9 years ago

    by Lemma

    A really cute feel-good poem. I thought the structure was a little awkward too but after reading it through a second time it makes more sense and keeps the words nice and simple. I like the idea of the bird with a broken wing aswell.

    Em xXx

  • 9 years ago

    by ShootingStar

    Saweeet<3

  • 9 years ago

    by Mousie

    Awww it was so adorable i loved it! neither of us have written lately lol, i think i forgot to put on a couple of my poems. i know i have one more to put on, but i just haven't been into writing, i'm pretty braindead i guess. writer's block has been upon me for a very long time unfortunately. hope everything is going well, get back to me when you get the chance!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah

    Aww, this is amazing. Your're such a great poet. I could hear the poet's voice throughout the whole poem. Brillant writing. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Sweer poem. I liked it. I wish that I cloud have had a nice v-day. Anyways nice formate great word choice. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by jane

    AMAZING!

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very romantic I peally like your style