You have expressed your feelings very well in the write. May peace and joy fill your heart once again soon.

sadaddy

Brilliant

Brilliant

Very well-written! I love the concept of this... Full of feeling and easily related to... another great write! 5/5

You were right, I did like this one :)

I can really relate to this poem. Especially since it was obviously coming from the heart.
The flow was a bit rocky and the rhyming scheme wasn't fully perfect but that didnt take away from the meaning of the poem at all.

It's like you've been hurt again and again and you start to wonder if love is even worth it? Why bother when you already know how it ends...Anyway great write!!

Alyssa. x

So saddddddddd your poems are more like short stories of your life

Yea this poem can be related to my life also :)
and also this poem is straight going to my favorites list :)

Im sorry that you had to go threw that ... i feel bad i truely do ...
and it is good to have poems come from somewhere not just out of the blue ...
all poems should have a life story backing them up ...
i love it 5/5 for sure

Lying is the greatest sin a relationship cannot withstand. Trusts executioner, painful and unforgiveable because they do it again and again. So many people lie instead of holding their head high. Karma, pride and the golden rule point the way to the high road. I too have been victimized by this immoral curse. Brought crashing down, defeated by one trusted and loved completely without reservation for many years.

Wow this poem is touching i love it.
cause it came from deep down.
5/5 your a very good writer
keep up the work && you'll get far.

-cookie/maria