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I loved it, it was great how you twisted it up. great
Tis reli good =]
keep it up 5/5
Wow, i love the ending part!!!! i used to be from tx, going to visit there in the summer.. by the way this is reallly good!
by blind soul
That was really go and sad but really good..great job!
by Black Rose
Great poems that is so true if ur guy gets u preg u should always give it aweek after tellin them to see how they feel cos dont forget men have feeling 2
Aww dats is really gud!!
by The Girl From Yesterday
I think it's a great poem, but the flow was a bit off at times
So sad...but beautiful poem.
by Lonely Rider
Excellent poem though very sad....good work..
Wow, that was a really good poem, kinda reminds me this movie on life time i watched..but wow, nice twist at the end, and it flowed good. keep up the great work!
by your love is mine
Aw that was so sad but the poem was good.=)
I actually reckon your a better writer than me ay!
Because all your poems flow so nicely.. Mine are all muddled up :P
You use words together that I wouldnt even think of using... Your alot more creative than Iam.........
Love your quotes & your poems....
5/5 ... Sad story .. great poem:)
WOW this is awesome
This is one of the best poems that i have read on p&q... i love how this poems tells a story about real life and how people live their life everyday, most ppl dont believe that these things really do happen...
i dont like it.
I mean...it was a great write!
haha. so thats a compliment.
wow hun.. you ARE amazing!
never stop writing..
ever. or else... ((dun,nun,nun,nunnnnnn))
by Inside the Liar
Wow. So not the outcome I was expecting. Great job with the imagery.
by Kara Lorraine
Omgosh, , Are You Kidding Me? ? You Have A Way With Words. . Goosebumps Ran Down My Spine. .
You're Amazing, , Not Me. . C:
Keep It Up. .
That was deep.
i loved it.
by Cotton Candy Clouds
Wow amazingly good twist to it wicked but sweet! you did a great job with this honestly it was sad but so nicely written you should be very proud of this piece! hope it wasn't true though : / 5/5 !