Comments : His World

  • 9 years ago

    by Jahieda

    I loved it, it was great how you twisted it up. great

  • 9 years ago

    by Sazzie

    Tis reli good =]
    keep it up 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Wow, i love the ending part!!!! i used to be from tx, going to visit there in the summer.. by the way this is reallly good!

  • 9 years ago

    by blind soul

    That was really go and sad but really good..great job!

  • 9 years ago

    by Black Rose

    Great poems that is so true if ur guy gets u preg u should always give it aweek after tellin them to see how they feel cos dont forget men have feeling 2

  • 9 years ago

    by HillaryNicole

    Aww dats is really gud!!

  • 9 years ago

    by The Girl From Yesterday

    I think it's a great poem, but the flow was a bit off at times

  • 9 years ago

    by anachic

    So sad...but beautiful poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Excellent poem though very sad....good work..

  • 9 years ago

    by Leah

    Wow, that was a really good poem, kinda reminds me this movie on life time i watched..but wow, nice twist at the end, and it flowed good. keep up the great work!

  • 9 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Aw that was so sad but the poem was good.=)

  • 9 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I actually reckon your a better writer than me ay!
    Because all your poems flow so nicely.. Mine are all muddled up :P

    You use words together that I wouldnt even think of using... Your alot more creative than Iam.........

    Love your quotes & your poems....

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Amena

    5/5 ... Sad story .. great poem:)

  • 9 years ago

    by neo

    WOW this is awesome

  • 9 years ago

    by mizunderstood

    This is one of the best poems that i have read on p&q... i love how this poems tells a story about real life and how people live their life everyday, most ppl dont believe that these things really do happen...
    Steph

  • 9 years ago

    by JustKristina

    O.O.o....*shivers*
    i dont like it.
    I mean...it was a great write!
    haha. so thats a compliment.
    so sad...
    wow hun.. you ARE amazing!
    never stop writing..
    ever. or else... ((dun,nun,nun,nunnnnnn))

  • 9 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Wow. So not the outcome I was expecting. Great job with the imagery.

  • 9 years ago

    by Kara Lorraine

    Omgosh, , Are You Kidding Me? ? You Have A Way With Words. . Goosebumps Ran Down My Spine. .
    You're Amazing, , Not Me. . C:
    Keep It Up. .

  • 9 years ago

    by brokenhearted

    That was deep.
    i loved it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow amazingly good twist to it wicked but sweet! you did a great job with this honestly it was sad but so nicely written you should be very proud of this piece! hope it wasn't true though : / 5/5 !