Why I Cry

by Renee Murdock   May 21, 2004


Why do these tears fall from my face
why all these bad memories can i not erase?
there's so much going on in my life right now
and deal with these problems i don't know how
my two best friends in the world are gone
and i don't know if i can move on
one has moved on to a better place
and her in my memory will never be erased
the other one just isn't there
i guess she doesn't have the time to spare.
why does it hurt so bad?
i guess cause they were the best friends i had
why is this happening to me?
alone is what i don't wanna be
i want them to come back
so our friendship will be back in tact.
i guess I'll just have to sit and pace
and wait for these tears to dry on my face.

*please let me know what you think*

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  • 9 years ago

    by XUrXLossXNotXMineX

    Amazing poem
    i love how it actually rhymes unlike most of mine....keep writing

  • 10 years ago

    by TIRED OF LOVE

    AWESOME IS WHAT I THINK...GREAT JOB..CHECK MY POEMS OUT AND LET ME KNOW WHAT U THINK?

  • 11 years ago

    by Am I Your Favourite Horse

    Wow....im impressed your a great writer

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaityln

    Excellent ............ illst one of my best friends shes not dead but we arent friends any more i feel what your saying

  • 12 years ago

    by Jme

    how stupid, that DID have alot of votes, well i liked the poem i commented, i added one bc i was bored and confused and ya no, but its sayin i have 31 poems....??? i dont i have ONE lol owell :-) i changed my name, i cant believe i deleted them all *hits head trying to bare the stupidness* lol