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I’m not showered in love like the others
Even when I put my best efforts into you...
You said you'd run along,
then you didn't...
Human expressions deformed
Sun shine void of warmth...
Baby, you were the moon, I was the sun,
We fell in love but when all was said and done...
by Aiko (Dreamsurfer)
I had a beloved cousin who hanged himself,
Because he was not earning much...
Do I look depressed because am always indoors?
I no longer move out like I used to...
The saddest tears are the driest ones seen in the bravest smile.
Don't tell one who writes of grief to rethink their "I" statements. When you know they had tears on their hands as they wrote, don't say the poem could be better. You might as well say their grief could be worse.
If someone shares a poem with you that is meant to help close an open wound, they don't want your opinion. They want your hand on their shoulder, gripping it tight.