Broken Winged Eagle

by Mike Wilburn   Apr 9, 2008


I know a man thoughtful and kind
Unassuming; he could speak his mind
Friend too many, family man, complete
Innocent child, earthly and oh so sweet

Trusting without reservation his heart he gave
Open and vulnerable his spirit is brave
Happiness his indiscernible goal
Constantly searching yet never whole

Eagles wings stately and strong
Soaring love's rapture, nature's song
A powerful creature the avian king
Immune, troubled not by cupids' cruel sting

Love's kiss a romantic interruption
Rational thought departed; complete disruption
Rejection certain, jubilation then despair
Spirit broken, a failure to prepare

Icarus the mythological fable
Flawed so human, sublime yet unable
Without hesitation his end expected
Unbridled courage, sound advice rejected

A raptor grounded never to soar again
Sympathy acceptable less is inhumane
Spread your wings and rise when able
Fearlessness enviable for those that are stable

In dreams there's comfort the spirit returns
Freedom at last from life's concerns
A bounty beautiful my heart's treasure
Faith and devotion provided with pleasure

Elevate inner consciousness on mended wing
Tennessee beauty you make my heart sing
Confidence restored my time does have worth
Appreciation forever your hand, my rebirth

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Wow.. Great Poem!!.. Amazing.. great flow.. and very deep.. I liked it!!.. keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Edit:
    This line, Loves kiss a romantic interruption
    I think it may need an apostrophe S after loves, seeing how it is loves kiss, showing ownership. Just like you did for life's concerns.
    I think it should be heart's treasure, while we're on the subject.

    Response:
    That was pretty kick ass. I can tell you worked very hard on it. The flow is flawless, you rhymed perfectly. The title is intriguing and you stuck to the subject rather nicely.

    Rating:
    This is a five for sure. This is why you're on my favorites. Many other people on this site (the younger generation) have far too many mistakes and their vocabulary makes it less appealing. It makes me want to whip out the scrabble board and teach them!