Oh my goodness!!! How people did not comment on this i will never understand. . . . . . . . its . . . . . .in lack of a better word......flawless. absolutely amazing. I especially love the lines "So kiss me, mortal angel" and "Stand me in your heaven
Lets dance our endless kiss." They imply such a love that goes deeper than an emotion ones body could feel. This is amazing.
a most enjoyable read
Love does make us write passionate and yet tender verses, doesn't it?
It is always nice to read through older verses of friends, just to see how they have evolved through time.
I can see your verses were very beautiful from the very start:)
I love your love poems more than the other ones, although they are very captivating as well.
Bravo on this beauty:)