by Sammerz Apr 25, 2008
category :
Internet slang /
other
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When i was younger |
by Kenzi
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Very well written, keep it up hun. |
by Bernice
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5/5 excellent poem keep up the good work well done |
by Sarah
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Such a sad touching poem... I loved it. The way you expressed your love & feeling towards your father are great.. |
by Tara
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Beautiful poem, it unreavled like a true story. amazing work, truely i usually enjoy readin poems with rythme, becuase they usually tend to flow better, but your poems always seam to flow beautifullly together, even without the rthmyes. it makes this poem unquie and very well wirtten, keep up the great job------tara |