Comments : Better a memory than a friend

  • 9 years ago

    by June

    Forgetting is hard to do ,I for one know that only to well.This was such a lovely poem ,I really loved it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sad and Alone

    Thanks for this poem. it struck me, and even question myself "am I better a memory than a friend?". your poem is so true for me. now, im lonely again, but hey! am glad you shared it. thanks keith!

  • 9 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    I had exactly the same thing happen to me years ago. I think the line; 'better as a memory' describes the feeling well.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah

    I can totally relate to what you've written Keith.... It took me a long time to over come the ache in my heart.. but you'll get through it in the end...It will all be memories ... Only the good ones you'll remember 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Lovely poem...
    Who was it written for hun?

    Speak soon

    5/5
    Danielle
    x

  • 9 years ago

    by Leoni

    Your Poem is class!!!!!!..ta 4 comment on mine!!x

  • 9 years ago

    by Yeka

    Love this poem its truly beautiful love it 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Im a poetic scholar

    Great work

  • 8 years ago

    by AnCi

    Awsome poem!

    I know exactly how it feels.. Even after several years has passed I still look back sometimes and wonder what happened...

  • 8 years ago

    by Katie

    This poem is truly heartfelt. I know for a fact that I can relate to it, and I'm sure many others can as well. Great job, hang in there, and thanks for the comment. :)

  • 8 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    I can relate to this poem alot!! Ive thought about old friends that for whatever reason, weve lost touch and I wonder the same things.... good poem!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Some how
    this line

    I'm better as a memory than as your friend

    rings my bell..so bad.
    such an amazing line that i promise will stick to my head for a while..
    u no bet got a gd imagenation.
    this poem was simpler than the one b4,...but that line just added a huge impact in a beautiful way.

    you know regarding the concept..time changes ppl..and ppl change with time..am not sure which one and i got a poem about this.
    but
    what matters is what WE remain..and what we never forget.

    5/5
    overall

  • Excellent message. everything you had felt great, so how could it be a source of pain? forgeting isnt easy but you manage but theres still that one thought that always leaves you wondering why she severed her ties to you. great writing. 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Fabulous! you're poem was so great...emotionally strong..very passionate...i like this stuff of yours, well-penned!5/5

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Keith,

    You have a great talent. I love how you reminisce even though it may be hurtful for you because those times surely are the make and break of us.
    You beat and rhyme keep the piece going smooth throughout and it's always refreshing to see.
    I feel that time changes us all some for the better, some for the worse.
    Take care, Em