Forgetting is hard to do ,I for one know that only to well.This was such a lovely poem ,I really loved it.

Thanks for this poem. it struck me, and even question myself "am I better a memory than a friend?". your poem is so true for me. now, im lonely again, but hey! am glad you shared it. thanks keith!

I had exactly the same thing happen to me years ago. I think the line; 'better as a memory' describes the feeling well.

I can totally relate to what you've written Keith.... It took me a long time to over come the ache in my heart.. but you'll get through it in the end...It will all be memories ... Only the good ones you'll remember 5/5

Lovely poem...
Who was it written for hun?

Speak soon

5/5
Danielle
x

Your Poem is class!!!!!!..ta 4 comment on mine!!x

Love this poem its truly beautiful love it 5/5

Great work

Awsome poem!

I know exactly how it feels.. Even after several years has passed I still look back sometimes and wonder what happened...

This poem is truly heartfelt. I know for a fact that I can relate to it, and I'm sure many others can as well. Great job, hang in there, and thanks for the comment. :)

I can relate to this poem alot!! Ive thought about old friends that for whatever reason, weve lost touch and I wonder the same things.... good poem!!

Some how
this line

I'm better as a memory than as your friend

rings my bell..so bad.
such an amazing line that i promise will stick to my head for a while..
u no bet got a gd imagenation.
this poem was simpler than the one b4,...but that line just added a huge impact in a beautiful way.

you know regarding the concept..time changes ppl..and ppl change with time..am not sure which one and i got a poem about this.
but
what matters is what WE remain..and what we never forget.

5/5
overall

Excellent message. everything you had felt great, so how could it be a source of pain? forgeting isnt easy but you manage but theres still that one thought that always leaves you wondering why she severed her ties to you. great writing. 5/5

Fabulous! you're poem was so great...emotionally strong..very passionate...i like this stuff of yours, well-penned!5/5

Keith,

You have a great talent. I love how you reminisce even though it may be hurtful for you because those times surely are the make and break of us.
You beat and rhyme keep the piece going smooth throughout and it's always refreshing to see.
I feel that time changes us all some for the better, some for the worse.
Take care, Em