Oooh...this gave me the chills..it was absolutly great!!!!....god. it was fab, so much power into this, its great!
Aly

O.o that really sent the chills down my spine...good work!

Amazing selection of words, powerful write indeed.

all the best and take care

It's dark indeed. Lines are well structured and words are good. This poem certainly nice to read... as it flows very well.

Amazin poem, well done, great choice of wordz:D

Although the theme of the poem was somewhat cliché, I still really loved this. It was so, so saddening, but not unusual to hear, y'know? I felt a strong sense of sympathy for the narrator the entire way through the poem.

You've written this very well. :)

Wow i really like your poems!
Wicked job, this one gave me the chills

Amazing write.. you definatly had your way with words in this one. The descriptive words and great word choice really set a dark mood for this poem and made it very sad. Wonderful write, however. Nothing to change in this one. 5/5.

Another chilling poem, I love it, I know you show me all your poems anyway but i love reading them up on here!

Wow, this one flows flawlessly to reflect dark emotion

You have so much talent

Wow, this was really good, and kept my attention. 5/5

I'm so out of practice - sorry I don't write very good comments!

I relate to the sentiments and emotion in the poem, but, of course, I could never put it in such a way that you did... wonderful metaphors and all the verses... beautiful.

This is so sad, but it gave me the chills. For something so cliche it is far from average. It spoke to me. The sentiments and emotions, I can feel pulsating through the words. It is wonderfully portrayed. Nothing I can say will amount the the perfection. This is amazing. The flow is flawless, the vocab is amazing and everything is great.
Wonderful!

Lexie
5/5

Great.... So I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but I think you have a wonderfully twisted mind... great piece...5/5

Wow this poem is beautiful...it flows so nicely...and it's so different from what im used of reading....you did an amazing job!!!...very unique<3...5/5 for sure:)

p.s- thanks for the kind comment you left on my poem:)

Wow, this is really well written. I'm not a big fan of dark poetry but from what I've read this is really good. You're very descriptive, but you also leave plenty to the imagination, not completely spelling it out. Great job

5/5

Not quite as powerful as your other pieces I've read, but still a wonderful piece. Your wording astounds me. I love it, as well as the way they are stuctured. Brilliant!

Brad

I like how you express your self in all kinds of way you are doing a good job hope you keep it up and do some more poems about life

I've read a few of your pieces and you're an amazing writer i'll say hah. I love this poem a lot and the others just as well (: