Beside broken glass and a blood-filled cup, theres a note

by Lemonbread   May 7, 2008


Shes beautiful when covered in bruises
Taking in drugs and sculling down cruises
You see her dance on her own grave
And the way she is no where near brave

Shes gorgeous when you see her bleed
And when people ignore what she needs
All she wanted was some love from you
Or anyone and don't deny that its not true

Shes daddy's little defect
The sadness that will infect
How shes mummy's big mistake
Leaving her to what she can take

Look at your little girl, all dressed up
Beside broken glass and a blood-filled cup
A note is in her pale hand so red
"Mummy, Daddy, see you when your dead"

TM - LiquidSugar

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    I liked this one, but I don't know, rhyming is okay but it just doesnt seem to flow perfect... try humming it when you write i know it brings allot more flow into my work.. check some out see if it helps

  • 9 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    A brilliant but sad piece 5/5 the flow was marvelous as was the rhyme!!!

    Keep Writing, lovely
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~