Comments : WAKE UP!

  • 10 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    This is an absolutely magnificent piece of poetry 5/5

    "Everyone dies,
    But not everyone lives,
    Can you experience this world,
    For all that it gives?"

    this is an amazing stanza and the whole meaning of the poem, what you're saying, rings quite true. =)

    Keep Writing, hun
    As Always,

  • 10 years ago

    by Angel

    Yo i'm feeling this poem i know what you mean though like the flow keep it up...

  • 10 years ago

    by Teria

    First stanza you have "Is" and it should be "If"
    Other than that amazing

    I loved how you compared it to cancer. It's, in a way, very similar to it. (:

    Wonder,wonder,wonderful job. (:

  • 10 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I love this poem sooo much... all true statements and I know I would change a whole lot of things. I think I will go out and venture more. Then again that may lead to some regrets:)

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow i really like this poem. i love how it will make people think. your words are strong, keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    This makes me think that life is EVIL!
    dont scare me ninja! i like life!
    makes me not wanna breathe... cuz then im just like... dying haha scary.
    great job <3333333333333333
    --i love my ninja!!!!!!!!!!!!--

  • 7 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Only one word give credence to this piece "amen"