My sweet sweet paradise

by Love vs Fate   May 13, 2008

My sweet sweet paradise,
The summers are warm
and it fills my life.
The sun is nice and comfortable
on my skin,
This world is beautiful if you take
the time to get to know it.
My sweet sweet paradise,
I've found you nature.
You have shown me what it's like,
To love mother nature.
A friend showed me many things,
That can be seen in the outdoor life.
I love being outside,
I never thought I would.
My sweet sweet paradise,
Is being there with that special person.
Walking in the sun,
Standing in the rain.
Watching the sun set,
Waiting for the night.
Wanting to know what it's like,
To see the sun rise.
Oh what a sight this is,
My sweet sweet paradise.


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  • 10 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Nice Travis... I liks.. lol.. great job.. don eva stop.. mon frére.. ^-^...

  • 10 years ago

    by XAlwaysXBrokenX

    Nice... i loved this poem trav its really good.. 5/5
    love you

  • 10 years ago

    by Coffee Loves Nachos

    Nice.. 5/5.. love how you worded it.. it is really good.. nature is a good way to show alot of emotions.