Comments : The hurt of a broken heart

  • 9 years ago

    by XtiredoftryingX

    That is amazing i like how you made every other line rhyme and you used simple words to get your poing across and when its read you can feel the pain and hurt it totally describes what ive been going through for a while now... 5 outta 5

  • 9 years ago

    by AMBER ROMER

    I CAN REALLY RELATE TO THIS POEM...

  • 9 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    I Love this poem
    I fell in love line after line...
    I relate to this..it hurts so much
    This is Beautiful 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Nice poem....
    Read my peom "Child Beggar Noshi"
    Rate and comment it,to let me know how you took it while reading

  • 7 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I so so feel this, it does ease I promise.

    It never goes but it does ease

    Hugs