Reaching their arms out as they are parted from one another,
They say one last thing..
amazing poem, truely unquie and orginal, a great read that eft you somewhat heartbroken and also somewhat understanding to the poem, relating it to your own life. a truely great poem, and if i had something critical to say about it i would but in a way i am left at the loss of words, great poem
9 years ago
Wow...That was an amazing poem! i had to go back and read some of the lines again because they were so meaningful and powerful! Great job and i cant wait to read more from you!
Oh my gosh i loved that like alot o.o. it was AMAZING from start to finish. keep up the amazing work...people like you dont get a second look =P i would actually save this and tell this to my kids someday lol.