Comments : The Angel and The Mermaid.

  • 9 years ago

    by heart

    Very nice flow... the rhythm is sync and nice.. and reading it.. just flows out of your mouth.. like a dance thats naturally was urs... very nice

    love you

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by heart

    I meant to say love it (daymmm i cant spell)

  • 9 years ago

    by dandelion

    Well.. wat can i say.. 100/100! i know you can do it by yourself..haha..:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Tara

    Reaching their arms out as they are parted from one another,
    They say one last thing..

    amazing poem, truely unquie and orginal, a great read that eft you somewhat heartbroken and also somewhat understanding to the poem, relating it to your own life. a truely great poem, and if i had something critical to say about it i would but in a way i am left at the loss of words, great poem

    tara

  • 9 years ago

    by homebound

    Wow...That was an amazing poem! i had to go back and read some of the lines again because they were so meaningful and powerful! Great job and i cant wait to read more from you!

  • Very well done it had a good ending and it flowed nicly 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Bugg

    Aww, this was beautiful! I really loved it. :) 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is very beautiful i love it
    i have put it on my favorite poem list
    you are a really great poet
    keep it up

  • 9 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wow 4/5 i realli lyke this poem =] good. work.. keep it up

  • 9 years ago

    by The Joker

    This was such a lovely peoms. It`s so sad that they can only be together when time let`s them be.

  • 8 years ago

    by meli

    Awwww!!!!!
    this is beautiful anday..=]

  • 8 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Oh my gosh i loved that like alot o.o. it was AMAZING from start to finish. keep up the amazing work...people like you dont get a second look =P i would actually save this and tell this to my kids someday lol.

    5/5//5/5/5/5 =]

    *hugs

    CourtneyxHolland