My Brother

by Chelsey   May 24, 2008


I Remember That Day
I Was Only Nine
The Day That You Died
At First I Thought Everything Was Fine.

I Was Holding You In My Arms
You Were So Fragile And Small
I Didn't Know What Was About To Happen
How My Life Was About To Crumble And Fall.

They Stole You From My Hands
Put You In A Small Room
ttached You To So Many Machines
I Just Hoped It Would Be Over Soon.

I Was Able To Se You
I Watched You All Day
Just Laying There, So Small, So Innocent
I Bowed My Head To Pray.

Then The Macines Started To Beep
All The Doctor Ran Up To You
They Seemed So Worried
Trust Me, I Was Worried Too.

They Came Out And Told Us
That They Were Sad To Say
But You Hadn't Made It
I Again Started To Pray.

"God, I Don't Know Why You Did It
Why You Had To Take My Little Brother
I Know There Must Be A Reason
As To Why You Hurt My Family And Mother.

I Was Going To Be A Sister
I Wanted To Be There When He Learned To Walk
I Wanted To Teach Him Many Things
Maybe Even Help Teach Him To Talk

I Know You Had A Reason, God
On For Hurting My Mother
I Know He's Up There With You
So Please Tell Him, 'I Mss You Dear Brother.'"

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cyber Saiyan

    I liked this poem overall. A few places were kind of rough; like a short line followed by a long line. I liked the innocence in the writing; it helped the general flow of the poem. Minus a few typos and the fact that every word is capitilized, its a nice poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Its so sad!
    It shows how alot of people feel... It was a great read!

  • 15 years ago

    by NeverBelieve

    O.m.g this is soo sad, but i love it it shows how much you loved him and how much you cared also how much yourself was hurting! keep writen i love it! Cx 5/5