Great choice of words throughout this poem, you describe your love and happiness then say your love is standing still. Nice title too, this whole poem touched my heart and was just amazing. Nice work and god bless! :)

I love it.. with few lines you have expressed the ideas and the emotions which is necessary to get the reader's attention. it was flawless.. keep it up!

Short, sweet and to the point. well, not really sweet, more painful. it was beautifully worded and flowed together brilliantly. a moving piece that definitely deserves a 5/5

Keep Writing, lovely
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

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its good poem and sweet, i like the way you discrip how is your love and how its change,with nice flow you did great jop well done 5/5

Wow a short but sweet pome there was alot of meaning in it with such few words

Like how you compared before and now

made the reader happy and hopeful
then ended with hopelessness
very sad, but well written

Often done, but what made this one stand out was the gentle ending.

"My heart was once a flutter of tiny butterflies."
This feels like an insecure start: 'flutter' and 'tiny' feel like insecure words. It's not necessarily bad, just uncommon.

"Our love was what brought brightness to my life.
My happiness could light the night sky."
Hopeful and vey bold, incontrast to the weak beginning. Especially the last line, it feels like wild, joyous laughter.

"My happiness is silently fading."
Poignant. I don't know why; you can never explain magic. I just really like this line.