Comments : I need you

  • 9 years ago

    by Kevin

    I thought it was very funny, the especially the end and the part about the hash.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lovely

    This poem was GREAT. Everything you said was felt from your heart. Everything you mentioned is needed by each other. I really loved this poem and it is on my favorite I especially loved where you said "Like people need church and a map needs to be searched" but really......... .the sun doesn't need to be hotter.

  • 9 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Nice i like it the end was my favorite part and am bored now just neede you to know:)p

  • 9 years ago

    by coreys girl

    I liked it a lot 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Valerie

    Simple, yet very unique :).
    I like it !. The rhyming scheme also works :D!

  • 8 years ago

    by mzlovehate

    My day is going sucky at the moment your poem made me smile and laugh. thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Samantha

    Love this lol!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Dark Love

    Funny and romantic good work

  • 5 years ago

    by shellfish

    I love it its real good!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Jin

    Very fun!

  • 5 years ago

    by Holly Roberts

    Ohmygina. You've gotta be Joshin' me. c; I love this poem. :p It's cute, funny, and I love it! It also just made my day. <3

  • 5 years ago

    by tainted melody

    Very funny...it made me giggle :)

  • 5 years ago

    by chelo

    I like the ending rhyme, pretty funny bout the stripper with no a** haha

  • 5 years ago

    by chelo

    I like the ending rhyme, pretty funny bout the stripper with no a** haha

  • 5 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Nyc cut..cute one..fallin fr t

  • 5 years ago

    by marina14

    This poems is a very good one keep up the good work (:

  • 5 years ago

    by nunu

    I love wat u did with this poem, different and fun. well done!!!!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Nina

    Three letters LOL

  • 2 years ago

    by Jose Delapaz

    Lol so true

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    I like this