Great imagery expressing deep emotion
"Romantic connections carried
Fights left to decompose"

I feel I may have traveled that road

I like your style

This is nice it hand a nice creative effort that was felt through out the whole thing it gave me insight XD

Wow... so beautifully written...
wonderful word choice ...
impressingly expressed... I really enjoyed reading this piece...

the starting beautiful.. the ending amazing... :)

wonderful.. keep writing.. :)

Ah, I liked thissss. It's written very well, and the vocabulary is good. =]

5/5

-Briana

I absolutely adore everything about it! It's short and yet it has multiple ideas (or memories maybe) compacted into it. Once again it surprises me that I like it without alot of rhyme, but i love the thought of one place holding so many memories that no one really has any idea what all lies there. BRAVO!

The format was nearly flawless, this is one of the finest poems i've read in a LONG time, my heart literally pounded as i read it, i read it 3 times, and that was enough for now, no critique, 100 lbs of emotion and passion, stuffed into a little basket of words...just astounding..thank you for directing towards this piece, or i would have never read it...and i am so thrilled to have..
john

I really enjoyed this; it was a unique way to express the "road" we all travel on through life. You explained the ups and downs clearly and with a nice poetic touch.

There isn't much to review since it's pretty short, but this was very nicely done. I enjoyed the read.

Your visuals, serving the purpose of leading one toward deeply inward experiences, are so very effective...
evocative and affective...I imagine you have a lot to say...

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2 suggestions:

"The stars (star's) yellow light"

and

"Natures (Nature's) glow.."

Wow
this is a really nice poem
it reads well and is quite interesting
i loved it (: .xxx

Wow. I enjoyed every single word of that. But the one thing that I favored, were that stanzas. I loved the word choice. It was so unique and it really brings out your talent. You can tell this came straight from your heart:)

5/5

Fantastic poem
Keep up the good work
Made me want more
5/5

In so few words you told a very deep story.
I always love it when someone is able to do that!
I love the words and the images portrayed.
You did an outstanding job on this, bravo!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid
ps: thank you so much for nominating my poem:)

Nice writing its really good