My addiction

by bella   Jun 1, 2004


Five years and counting
when will it Eva end?
I'm addicted to the enemy
yet the enemy is sum1s friend
i deceive myself and others
of the truth behind my eyes
the anguish of entrapment
painful silent cries
they that know choose ignorance
its so much easier then facing
my demons and entangled thoughts
a mind 4Eva racing
continual damage and actions
an identical unwritten script
calloused hands and fingers
a throat and stomach ripped
painful life I'm caged 4Eva
will it ever end?
only once i release the addiction
and become my own best friend.
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PLEASE COMMENT i would luv to hear all it took me ages to write this poem its my 1st real poem so plz comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by ganjaru

    Adik !!
    hehe
    ang kulet ng pagkkgwa
    aus!!!
    glingan mo pa ^^

  • 15 years ago

    by thalia

    This Poem is truly awesome..
    I really liked it..
    You are an excellente writer! =D

  • 16 years ago

    by lisa

    This poem is beautiful i mean i write poems in less then a minute but thats because i know how to get my feelings out its nice to know that u put alot of thought into this!!!!

    mwah love
    lisa

  • 19 years ago

    by МÅťťђĕш Яĕĩŋĕßĕřg

    I would have to agree with Meredith in that case. Using real words insted of slang can only help what you are trying to say. Now, if Eva was supposed to be like that because it stands for someone's name, then that's OK. But please try to use the correct form of "for." With the rhyme and beat i could find no faults. I hope you keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by cable

    Well thought off...
    Inspiring......
    Some true poets still live in this world
    and you are one of them...

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