Double Homicide

by Ike Dizzle   Jul 5, 2008

Crips on the left
Bloods on the right
Leaders faced off
Everyone broke out into a fight

Bullets flying everywhere
Bodies falling down
But at the end of the day
Only 2 bodies were found

The 2 leaders still standing
Both with guns at hand
Trying to prove one thing
Whos the better man

They both pull the trigger
The guns fell aside
Both men fall in
A double homicide

So now its a battlefield
Nothing but dead bodies here
Now thousands of people dead
Because 2 groups wasnt happy here


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Latest Comments

  • Wow great job....i liked how you wrote this out 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Fredy

    The poem has a great flow and it speaks volumes of the problems society is facing, however the last stanza lost a little of the flow the others were filled with.

  • 9 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A descent enough poem. I liked the flow and rhymes of the third stanza, disliked the closing stanza for those reasons. Sorry, if this seems harsh, but it just seems really, really average to me.


  • 9 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    It's been a while. You bring reality into this poem. It reminds me of the crime and problems of our society. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Jessica

    This paints a good picture in your head, it's unique and overall a good poem. good job. =]