Comments : Love is...

  • 9 years ago

    by Blueleo

    You captured a lot of truth in this poem I really liked it. Overall, it was a great read. I think it would go a lot further with some punctuation and apostrophes and some capitalizations but other then that it's great. I still don't get one line though, I think there must have been a typo. The line is:

    knowing that you ill never sleep right

  • 9 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    My goodness you have a wonderful way of writing. Love is just as you said, simple wonderful times with that special someone.
    You wrote this will flow and emotion.

  • 9 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Awww that was so sweet and so very true. i loved that it sowed how you think what love means to you. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    You know what? I bet you sat there and thought you could go on and on with this. Kinda like those old cutesy cartoons. But you didn't. And that, I think, makes this poem all the better. You've captured the simply personal things and you've crafted them into something that flows wonderfully and is a good length. Fantastic!

  • 9 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    That is so true! 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing

  • 8 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Aww this poem was greatly written and it just speaks the truth about love, A great read, keep it up (:
    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    BEAUTIFUL!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by moonlil

    I loved that poem! Great job.

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww... this poem is so true and beautiful! I think anybody who has been in love can relate to this piece... I know I can! You've expressed the way I feel inside! I really enjoyed it. Great job! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    A beautiful, passionate poem! You express the feeling of love with genuiness!

  • Awwh this is a beautiful poem. I've felt love only once, and you've showed in words just how special it can be.

    I particularly loved the ending:

    "Your dreams, your life, your everything,
    Each tear, each smile a new day may bring"

    Amazing ending =] Great work 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Beautiful passionate poem.
    Love is all that and so much more on an undescribable level.
    5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by Fires Fade

    Wow great poem, you defined love brilliantly.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is lovely and oozes love and sincerity. You say your words are simple, which I disagree with, but what cannot be argued about is the warmth and complexity of your content. This is wonderful,
    All the very best,
    Ben