That was really sweet. well written.
gr8 job. 5/5

Jesse...seriously this is the best love poem i've read in a really long time. it's....breathtaking ((i dislike that word.))....5/5

Jesse.... this was amazing.

my fav stanza:

"Hum poems out. I love you
Red book of lullabies
Sweet dreams, my love, my fairy tale
You hum as you close your eyes"

sweet dreams... you hum as you close your eyes... its mindshattering.

i'm tearing up, its so good... =')))))

~sophie~