Comments : DONT BE A MOTHER WITHOUT BECOMING A WIFE!

  • 9 years ago

    by Diana Barahona

    Wow; this is really good, i laughed throughoutt.

  • 9 years ago

    by LovedThenLost

    Aha i absolutely love this poem!!! its hilarious

  • 9 years ago

    by HvN

    Great poem! awesome lesson taught, but hey not alll boys are like that :P

    nice job! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Goodbye

    I think this poem is awesome. Yes, it sounds a bit funny...but seriously... It was a good point.

    None of us should be misused. Being a wife before becoming a mother...is a brilliant idea.

    Too many girls are played and after this guy disappear they are all alone in this world with a baby. It is difficult situation.

    I wish men would have respect to women to carry the responsibility of their own actions.

    Thanks for sharing this piece. I wish people listen your advice.

    Luv,
    Noor

  • 9 years ago

    by marilyn marti

    Hilarious and true sometimes lol good job!

  • 9 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hullo there that was a serious message in a funny poen very nice.Well done

    Grant

  • 3 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Amen!!!! Hallelujah!!!! Bless the poet!!!! This should be the universal she-code!!!