Oh Mo, I haven't read this poem since you first posted it. Rereading it now has made me cry. This is so very beautiful and it comes within instants of touching our beautiful Elisabetta. I miss her dearly.
Her spirit was a gift to us.
The brightest flame burns quickest.
Miss you! Come back to us in THE CLUB. We alllll miss you, lady.
This makes me think of one of my best friends who lives sooo far away from me, so you touched off for me, from the beginning. Some nice work and I think for the most part your flow was pretty on. I enjoyed this. Good work.