Comments : Resonance

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is so beautifully written, I love the descriptive words you used and this was just awesome! Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Clever word play, excellent word choice. An intriguing and thought provoking piece.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    This is very curious. While the vocabulary and structure are very pleasing, I did find it hard to find any clear direction. I love poetry that has subtle ambiguity enough to give many a reader a feeling that they can identify with the words, but I found this very hard going. It may be that it's a deliberately technical masterpiece, but as an exercise in poetic leisure I found it cumbersome and uncomfortable. That said, I would love to truly know the story or intent behind it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a very deep and intense piece this is. The imagery and word choices are teriffic. You did an excellent job on this.
    Take CareCindy

  • 9 years ago

    by ReBecca

    I couldnt flow with this as poetry. I saw it more as a song that is being sung, or maybe that is how it flowed in me. I kept putting a beat behind it when I read it. Whatever, I liked it.