A date to remember

by Siro aKa Gaara   Aug 29, 2008

Im standing outside your door,
Rehearsing just what to say.
Do I tell you I think you are beautiful?
Nah that sounds corny and far too lame.

Should I try to play it cool?
Lean against your door and say, wassup?
I was just in the neighborhood baby,
Was wondering if you wanted to hook up?

Nah I dont want to sound cocky,
With an ego too big for my head.
I knock three times quickly,
Deciding to wing it instead.

The door opens and I freeze,
You smile and ask me what Im doing here.
This is it, I think to myself,
Its time to throw aside my fears.

Sarah I really like you.
I think you are funny, cute, and nice.
I was wondering, if you werent busy that is,
Would you like to go on a date with me tonight?

Sarah just stood there looking at me,
A shocked look was in her eyes.
The silence shattered when I heard a guy say,
Sarah is everything alright?

Everything went into slow motion,
Then I turned and ran away.
I had run a block and my phone started ringing,
I picked up to hear you say.

Justin, I tried to tell you,
But you had started running and it was too late.
That guy was my brother and hes leaving now,
So yes, I would love to go on that date.


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  • 8 years ago

    by D

    Awesome. I love it!

  • 9 years ago

    by Just Jessy

    Wow! This is amazing! You can feel real emotion in this poem (: 5/5 :D xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Mishka

    WOW is this a true story???
    awww this is awesome i looooove this. goes very well... flows nice... :)

  • 9 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    Ii really lyked dis onee! (:
    it was super cutee.

  • 9 years ago

    by SgrQn

    This is really cute and a tad funny <3