Comments : Call It What You Want, It Won't Make Me Feel Better

  • 9 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Wow, harsh...can totally feel the pain coming from this poem.

    sympathies
    OCTOBER X

  • 9 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    Brilliant. The way you've put this together is fantastic! Starting it with lines that are short and precise, and ending it with longer, angrier lines brings each stanza a development in the relationship that builds a whole picture that I am certain will be frighteningly familiar to many here on this site.

    I find many relationship poems on here rather tiresome and impersonal, but this... This is spectacular. You can be proud of this, make no mistake about it!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Another great write.

  • 9 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    I LOVED IT!! and i just added it to my favorites. This is brilliantly amaaazing! great work. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Finding myself

    I love th rhyme its good and the part about the string around the finger was really great 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy Miller

    WOW! Straight to the point...good one 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by The Queen

    Love your sarcastic tone and phrases, you nailed it!! Keep it up! :)