Comments : "LOVE"

  • 13 years ago

    by PS

    Again I LOVE IT. very good.

  • 13 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Short but sweet :]

  • 12 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Short and sweet lit pretty boy said! I really like it, great job, perfect score!

  • 12 years ago

    by kelS;

    Wow. this one actually is soo good. i can`t really explain why.. but probally because the flow is so good. wow. i couldn`t think of anyways to improve it! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by *Raven Angel*

    I liked it it just tells me guyz do suck! well some do well thanks for the comment i apericate the comment this was a pleasure to read!!:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Green M&M

    Great job........i give a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by not a poet

    Very very good! one of the best i read today! keep it up!
    i loved the emotion with such simple phrases!

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalee

    Its really good and really true :D great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Cayce

    Good job short and sweet. I enjoy short poems. The flow and rhyme were good. You did a wonderful job! Keep it up!

    Cayce

  • 12 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Very good poem! Short and to the point. I love poems that have short lines. It is a unique format. The flow is on target and the rhyme in it doesnt sound forced at all----Great write! Definately a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Wonderful. the shortness of the lines made this poem really effective. i lvoed it. a brillient work

    Ruby

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Another great poem, please keep writing.
    xxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Brilliannt. Short sweet and to the point.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    The lines are so short, but the words are so powerful. Great job. I love reading love poems. This is an excellent piece. Keep it up.

    >black&&blue

  • 12 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Good job, yet again. I thought it really did send out a message, even though it was sorta short. Very good job. 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 12 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Good fast pace created by the short words, a nice effect, like the rhyming as well.

    -biscuit-

  • 12 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I like the set up of this poem.
    The feeling and everything I got when I read it was amazing.
    Great Write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The poem makes sense. The flow was stable.

  • 12 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I love this.. I simply love this. Nothing else to say. It was wonderful and something I wish I would have written.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 12 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    AnnMarie --
    Wow, LOL it took me a while to find a poem of yours that I haven`t already done. Lol. I think the flow worked out perfectly -- the rhymes seemed a bit forced, but it was really good. Spelling and grammar, as usual, was perfect. Wonderful job, 5/5.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood