gr8 work!! really nice!! keep it up!!
tc byeeee

Love the last stanza

I love the last stanza alse! it's almost like the last stanza of my poem "I Think I'm falling In Love" GREAT JOB! (once again) 5/5!!!!!!!

Perfect, i loved this poem, it was well written, i think it was awesome
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My only suggestion: Edit out the site errors.

Whoa...Wow...That had alot of emotion and some sadness. It was really well written, I enjoyed reading it, and it kept my attention.