Comments : Dancing Snowflakes (Rondeau)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Silvia,

    I adore this format and also the subject.
    Such a magical poem. I am adding this one to my favs as well and not just because you told me about my poem, I really, really like this verse!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    I just love this. what a beautiful painting for the mind. Excellent work of art and I have to nominate this for the weekly, good luck I hope you win

  • 8 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Sylvia,

    this is a form I have never tried, however, after reading your fine example I feel like attempting it. As I read this aloud, it sounded pleasurable to the ear, flowing with an ease that hid the fact that this poem is emmensely technical..a tribute to the talent you obviously have.

    Very well done.

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Congrats on the well deserved win, dear lady!

    Hugs,

    Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Snowflakes are dancing, and im dancing on the words of this poem. very well written, your words keep the reader captivated. iv never read a rondeau before but im glad i read urs, i loved it!

  • 8 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    I love your poem, Sylvia, Your imagery is so vivid here. Can see the branches in the covered with snow as I read your poem. Brings back snowy memories for me!

  • 8 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Your poetry is something special. Flow and wording is excellent. Imagery is vivid and beautiful. Very Enjoyable

  • 7 years ago

    by Fran

    This is breath takingly beautiful. The imagery is just exquisite!

  • 7 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    Snowflakes are dancing as they come spiraling down,
    like tiny ballerinas all dressed in white gowns.

    Just the first two lines have got me captivated, wanting to read on. I love the way you write, the comparisons you make between something as simple as a snowflake with everyday occurences. Definitely, without a doubt, 5/5!

  • This is such a beautiful poem Sylvia.
    I though I would share a video with you from an album I had in the 70's by Tomita, called Snowflakes Are Dancing , he is a single artist on a Moog Synthesizer & every note you hear is a solo performance , I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed your poem
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oz3wNCT4JAc ...5/5 ...Jim

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG AM SO IMPRESSED>>SO Inspired ...this poem was so full of images,,,i loved the title...the title was a poem by it self..i love the 3 stanzas...such a beautiful form...

    u used ur wordds to ur side and u drew images from each couple of lines.. well done
    ur so talented and am happy ive chose this poem.

    5/5

  • WOW!! This is a work of art. The imagery was just MAGIC!! Your vocabulary was flawlessly beautiful. Just an amazing piece of poetry here, and I'm glad you have blessed us enough to view such talent. 5/5 Congratulations on the well deserved win. (:

    Alisha

  • 6 years ago

    by Milo

    A beautiful poem. I love the imagery and how vivid your words appear in the back of my mind; the snowflakes dancing in my head.

    I love to read poems of the past; its like finding a lost book of grandeur in the clutter of a magnificent library. Thank you.

  • 1 year ago

    by Trish

    I love the wording, it flows so easily and the format is a difficult one that you penned with perfection.