this is a form I have never tried, however, after reading your fine example I feel like attempting it. As I read this aloud, it sounded pleasurable to the ear, flowing with an ease that hid the fact that this poem is emmensely technical..a tribute to the talent you obviously have.
Snowflakes are dancing as they come spiraling down,
like tiny ballerinas all dressed in white gowns.
Just the first two lines have got me captivated, wanting to read on. I love the way you write, the comparisons you make between something as simple as a snowflake with everyday occurences. Definitely, without a doubt, 5/5!
This is such a beautiful poem Sylvia.
I though I would share a video with you from an album I had in the 70's by Tomita, called Snowflakes Are Dancing , he is a single artist on a Moog Synthesizer & every note you hear is a solo performance , I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed your poem
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oz3wNCT4JAc ...5/5 ...Jim
WOW!! This is a work of art. The imagery was just MAGIC!! Your vocabulary was flawlessly beautiful. Just an amazing piece of poetry here, and I'm glad you have blessed us enough to view such talent. 5/5 Congratulations on the well deserved win. (: