Comments : The Lord Said to Me

  • 9 years ago

    by Kylie Jo

    I really like this,
    its sweet.


    check some of mine out?

  • 9 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderfully Penned!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Christopher Hantman

    Wow, i like this a lot. It tells a good story.
    Keep it up!


  • 9 years ago

    by damont

    Wonderful short poem excellently written and i love the story told. yup 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by victoria

    I love the story behind it. "Im Begging for forgiveness upon your disgrace...ive know that ive done wrong now i know that time has changed"-one of my lines. your poem reminded me of mine...lovely job.