Hey this is a nice poem. so emotive and deep
i love ur rhyming scheme. it suited so well
keep up the good job

take care
bree

***We'll die once at the enemies hand, and we'll die again for the American man
Life itself seems to fade away, leading us on thinking were not here to stay
But our souls drift on further everyday, searching for something besides the games were forced to play***

This is really my fav part,,,,,,its so good 5/5
love u tons baby!:)
-Courtney (jailbait)

We are = We're. You've accidently put 'were' instead of 'we're' a few times.

Once again you made me cry. I must admit you guys do help my fears that deal with many thoughts of being terrorized by other men. But, there's still the fear that some amazing guy with a loving family, or even no family at all is over there fighting to wind up dead. And, while he fought so bravely for our country there are so many people over here doing nothing about such things. I know many try but a lot of times that's not enough.

You're a good man, Shadowe. A brave and kind many. I respect you for that. And, I love you even though I have no clue who you are or where you're from. My heart goes out to you and your family. God Bless.

I liked this poem Chris. It was really amazing. ((5))
Harlea