Noone ever tells you,
how to cope when it all falls apart.
when you loose your one and only.
nothing may seem fair again,
nothing may matter again.
you can beg, pray, wish.
but you know deep down in your broken heart.
you know, she is never comming home.
so you sit in the corner of your room
and thats when you realise,
you realise your all alone.
you think of all the sorrys, the ones you never said.
and now your all alone,
because noone ever tells you
hope to cope, when it all falls apart.
I love the title it really is a unique one, but you could've held onto that idea the whole way through, you forgot the school part in the poem, so you should have possibly changed the title.
to something like...' the things they never taught us' 'no one evcer tells you'
overall its a good poem i like the repetition on the bottom and top however you have a spelling mistake hope should be how.
anyway pleasure to read xx