Comments : The Quiet Cabin

  • Very deep i loved it.

    keep up the great work.

  • 8 years ago

    by INcognito

    This poem is really amazing! keep up the good work ;)

  • 8 years ago

    by DeepSoul

    That was deep. Good Job! Keep writing. :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Yes I remember this poem as a win on the main boards and an entry in the club poems I do not recall commenting on it then as there seemed to be a lot going on. I feel it was great having it on the front page, and I am proud to be in the same club as a talented poet and animator.

  • 8 years ago

    by Rachel

    This poem is incredibly amazing. Your descriptions make the story come to life. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Tori

    I like it.
    =]

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    I adore the last line! this poem is filled with pure emotion. it's also very raw, it was a pleasure to read this. great job! 5/5

    :]

  • 8 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Exactly what Michael said :)
    Very well written, Johnny boy. I love picturing each line and the expression on the face of the man you describe. Given the objects and activities at play, an essence of time is permitted.. old and slow, yet timeless.
    Am I making sense?
    Well anyway, good job.
    Love ya!

  • 7 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    Very story like vivid, and complex and simple all at once.