Am I dead?

by Esther   May 14, 2009


Am I dead?

No not yet.
Is the reply.

Why not? Why?
Because it is more fun to keep you here.
Without you we would have to find something else to amuse ourselves with.

Please, let me go.
End this, let me be dead.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really liked this. But one thing that bothered me was the third stanza. The way you have it worded makes the poem look less appealing to the eye. I would shorten the sentences so they don't look so long. But other then this I got a creepy feeling from this. Great work hun. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by NiQk

    Ehh... I dont quite understand. I am very sorry my comments arent always... Praise. I disd like it, It's just confusing. I know you asked for 1 for 1 and thats what i was planning but now I'm definately reading more. there's something about your poetry that i love! Expect more comments

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Wow. this poem is.. ok it has alot of emotion in it and i can feel it. its like you want to die but why? u should live!

    i like this poem alot. it has good flow and its short but good. its like a conversation with God or something. 5/5

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