Comments : Let Your Heart Make The Choice

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Let your heart make the choice - something we should do at times but should also temper those choices with what our head is telling us. Sometimes the head is right. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Timothy r

    This piece seems oh so familiar, I like the way you started and ended it with the title, it drives the point home.
    Don't banish our beautiful life"
    and leave me with strife
    for my soul knows only you
    living in this world for you"

    this was my favorite phrase..very familiar indeed, Timothy r

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Meena,

    Most people who leave their spouse regret their decision after a while...sometimes it's not to late to turn the tide..but sometimes the one left behind finds a far better partner;)

    Beautifully written and a strong plea...what man in his right mind could resist it?

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Wow this was strong...
    i loved it! :D

  • 8 years ago

    by Lulu

    Cute poem

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Meena
    What a sad heartfelt poem.

    So before you say goodbye
    and walk out the door
    darling...think twice
    let your heart make the choice

    There is so much we would miss about the other person if someone leaves. So many times these things aren't thought about because this is done in a moment of anger when we aren't thinking of tomorrow.

    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    What a beautifully written poem (hopefully not true)..
    Only thing I have to say is punctuation and capital letters, other than that I thought it was well written, and very heartfelt.

    Lonely
    XxX

  • 8 years ago

    by Timothy

    I like the line "my flowers in the garden will die".
    I see you got your old fan-club. Maybe some new? I used to write for the encouragement of votes and praise, but I write mainly for me now. Don't get me wrong, nothing wrong with people praising you (or me for that matter), but it's just not as important.
    Anyway, excellent poem.

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Outstanding piece, so much to think before making such heartbreaking decision.

    Look back through the years
    of how we hold each other dear
    a life without you is miserable
    to walk away from me are you able

    Loved this stanza above, could relate to it so very much.
    Great write dear

    all the best and take care